Monday, May 4, 2015

Two cents needed: Reworked Book Blurb

I've been working today on my book, Seasons, blurb. 

This is the old blurb: 
Chain-smoking, sex addict Special Agent Alex Bailey is on the FBI fast track, but carnal cravings are overriding his career ambitions. Driven by his addiction he gets himself assigned to a new partner, Special Agent Katherine Mitchel, who is unaware of his sordid past or his true mission. Their lives become upended when she uncovers evidence against The Syndicate, a powerful group that controls the police, Congress, and even the FBI. They find themselves with their lives on the line, with no one to trust but each other. In what becomes the most dangerous investigation of their careers, things quickly become something more... something personal.

This is the new blurb:
Chain-smoking, recovering sex addict Special Agent Alex Bailey, a hot shot at the FBI, is trying to put his sordid and traumatic past behind him. In order to redeem himself he gets assigned to a new partner, Special Agent Katherine Mitchel, who is unaware of his true mission. On the eve of their new partnership, Katherine uncovers damning evidence against The Syndicate crime ring. The group, which controls the police, Congress, and even the FBI, will do anything to stop Katherine from bringing that evidence to light. Katherine soon finds herself with her life on the line and no one to trust but her new partner, Alex. In what becomes the most dangerous investigation of their careers, things quickly become something more... something personal.

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